wow. short, sweet, and to the point. your writing is VERY good.

i love this one.

wow. at risk of sounding redundant, this is a really good poem. I realize my reviews are kind of sucking.

I love the parenthetical note, it seems sort of thrown in, and makes the whole thing flow a little. . . differently. feels human.

O...shivers, I quite like this. I have one crit though, the 'that is' at the end seems off, maybe 'at all', but that's just my view.

cheers Junkd

Wow... so simple but it says so so so much. "(3:06 in the morning, i’m so precise)" I love that one. "lips so still it’s hard to believe they move so well —when they do move, that is" and that line is beyond beautiful. I can relate oh so much and it's just... wow. I love this. Never stop writing.

oh wow...this is something beautiful. so perfect, so powerful...so simple...and yet just so damn powerful.

omigasp. i love it. it's simple, as precise as what it's talking about. your writing is brilliant no matter what (i hope you know that by now) but it's when you drift off your creative spectrum & float back home that you explode in my face until i don't see anything but the stars&lights with every blink-of-my-eyes. ** beautiful, dear.

~kait

The part in parentheses detracts from the rest of this piece which is really quite wonderful.

There's something special about this.