Yay for loud-ness! That's the only way to listen to music. I'll be deaf by the time I'm 30. Whatever. This is a great poem — short, but to the point. I like the image it created in my head. Loud rock concert, teenage girl wandering lost...you get the picture, I'm sure. Keep up the great writing, and thanks for the reviews! D

Christine

Vividly unusual. Various scenes can be created by these words. That makes this a wonderful interprative piece.

I don't know how but you've managed to convey an awful lot in those three lines. It reminds me of when my family used to argue and I sat in my room hoping they'd stop soon. I really like this. x

Hello! I like this, however, it has so much more potential! Maybe add to it? Or perhaps turn it into a haiku? I like it though. Keep writing! _

Anna

this seems rather short and incomplete. but at the same time, it kind of works. anyway, nice job. love how you carefully chose the right words. keep on going!