nice but i dont understand chapt 21. its kinda weird. isn't it supposed to be like a mini case? is ryan gunna die

OK, so is that their dad and Amy, or is that in the future? You confuse me!

So did Ryan die? Cuz that really sad.

NICE!

Again, another good case. I was thinking that his parents kidnapped him, for publisity or something. Keep up the good work!

I loved it. You have real tallent! I'm going to go on to read case two now!

wow. i liked the first case, but the minicase was too easy to solve. i still love the story though, plz read and review my stories ok? my mysteries suck lol but who's counting? LOL. also, can I IM U sometime?

i think that the summary for the story Tace Evidence is very good taht you have writtin but you have one mistake: evidence cannot be biased nor can it lie, it should be evidence cannot be based nor can it lie.

Ryan has good taste! FMA all the way!

I'm liking your story so far. And i'm going to look up those books you mentioned for references in my own mystery!

ok so I didn't manage to solve it first but then I never really expected I'd be able to lol. I love reading mysteries but my theories are usually so far off it's not even funny. Anyway I think that you did a really good job with this story and aside from the plot, I really liked the way the family interacted with each other. You portrayed it so effortlessly and it all works so well :D

Those kids are sure sneaky. Her mother wouldn't have been a good investigator if she hadn't noticed what her kids were doing behind her back. :)

This looks like a great start! Stealing cases from their mother..lol. interesting. From the looks of it, I suppose their mother is a police detective herself. good chapter.