Lol! That is absolutely hilarious, I love this so much!

Love,

Dia

:) Oh, wow. I liked this one. Nice job.

SF

okay, so i DONT listen. its a problem. but i havent had much but encouraging reviews for that stuff lately ;) so i was quite happy to continue, as well as adding the factor of extreme to ultimate boredom. sorry. but what i DONT know why and you DONT tell me, is why im on ur favs, if u hate my writing so much...? could you please explain? thanks. i would appreciate it.

and nice poem. the end was a funny twist.

At the risk of flaming, may I just say that this poem was a complete waste of the reader's time? Thank you.

Hahaha, thats hilarious.

i was never a fan of rhyming poetry.& after reading this,i'm still not a fan.

usually, i don't respond to hostile reviews, but either i'm just in an exceptionally bad mood, or you just happen to be special.

1) i know how to type properly, thanks. whether i choose to leave my letters uncapitalized is not an indication of my inability to type, it's a choice. you'll find that many on this site choose not to capitalize. "don't randomlybold a sentence," you said. well i throw back at you not to randomly underline a sentence. i know ther are no underlines in this piece, but i perused something else of yours with underlines. hypocritical much?

2) "If this is supposed to be a poem, you're in the wrong section." exercise a little modesty. you're not as intelligent as your arrogance warrants. it wasn't poetry, hence it wasn't under poetry.

3) "This is pointless." well thank you for your opinion. i wont refute it. "Otherwise, this is just confusing, without any beginning or ending, and is pointless." maybe you haven't noticed, but not everything requires a rigid structure like your rigid self seems to want. some people are more intelligent than to require a a step-by-step "let's spell the plot slowly for retards"

oh & by the way, your poem was pointless.

Hah, that reminded me of a commercial actually. Nice write

haha! that is great! the ending is not what i would expect at all! haha great job and i like this!