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| DiaRose 2007-11-07 ch 1,  | abuseLol! That is absolutely hilarious, I love this so much! Love, ~Dia |
| ShadowFane 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuse:) Oh, wow. I liked this one. Nice job. SF |
| wonderland is different now... 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuseokay, so i DONT listen. its a problem. but i havent had much but encouraging reviews for that stuff lately ;) so i was quite happy to continue, as well as adding the factor of extreme to ultimate boredom. sorry. but what i DONT know why and you DONT tell me, is why im on ur favs, if u hate my writing so much...? could you please explain? thanks. i would appreciate it. and nice poem. the end was a funny twist. |
| But I Die Without You 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abuseAt the risk of flaming, may I just say that this poem was a complete waste of the reader's time? Thank you. |
| x.sweet.catastrophe.x 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseHahaha, thats hilarious. |
| euphemismsforlukewarmtraged... 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abusei was never a fan of rhyming poetry.& after reading this,i'm still not a fan. usually, i don't respond to hostile reviews, but either i'm just in an exceptionally bad mood, or you just happen to be special. 1) i know how to type properly, thanks. whether i choose to leave my letters uncapitalized is not an indication of my inability to type, it's a choice. you'll find that many on this site choose not to capitalize. "don't randomlybold a sentence," you said. well i throw back at you not to randomly underline a sentence. i know ther are no underlines in this piece, but i perused something else of yours with underlines. hypocritical much? 2) "If this is supposed to be a poem, you're in the wrong section." exercise a little modesty. you're not as intelligent as your arrogance warrants. it wasn't poetry, hence it wasn't under poetry. 3) "This is pointless." well thank you for your opinion. i wont refute it. "Otherwise, this is just confusing, without any beginning or ending, and is pointless." maybe you haven't noticed, but not everything requires a rigid structure like your rigid self seems to want. some people are more intelligent than to require a a step-by-step "let's spell the plot slowly for retards" oh & by the way, your poem was pointless. |
| chaos called creation 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abuseHah, that reminded me of a commercial actually. Nice write |
| lordelfy 2006-02-11 ch 1, | abusehaha!! that is great! the ending is not what i would expect at all! haha great job and i like this! |