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Reviews For: On the Inside Looking Deeper
Incognito-Scribe 2006-02-15 . chapter 1
This was a good poem, I really liked how it was about wondering if you should tell people your deep feelings. I have a good friend like that, and I'm afraid to tell her those things (also because I like her and don't want her to think I'm stupid) but also because it just seems weird. But once you do, you feel better, it seems. I could really connect to this poem, so I liked it a lot! (Adds to favs) Keep up the good work, I'll keep my eye out when you post new stuff!
son of frost 2006-02-12 . chapter 1
Good poem. I like the ending, it's humorous in a way. More often than I wonder how others feel about me, I find myself asking how I feel about others, even if I think I already know.
the Stranger in the moonlight 2006-02-12 . chapter 1
Nice job. I liked this, I hate the feeling of someone in my head, but you made it sound enjoyable. This was really well written, I liked reading it.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.
Hail the Warrior 2006-02-12 . chapter 1
Nice. I understand this extremely well.

Thanks for the reviews, too.
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