Hmm, its ok, not bad, I'd love to see how the story continues, write more :).

it's good, it's good. i think it's kinda stereotyping the persob who finds them in the closet but ilike it. no spelling mistakes.

you've definetely caught my interest...keep going.. ^_^ its great so far.

~Amber

umm.. hello... CONTINUE NOW!!

I really liked this first chapter. And I especially like the name Majandra. I can't say that I've heard it before. Please continue. Take care.