I love it! I mean it. And I love the Eryc, Erys thing thats brilliant! I love that its in the Philipines, it sounds so fun and exotic I can't wait to get out of the US though I love my friends (= I have a Phillipino friend but she's in Australia now...lucky thing (=

Anyway I love this KEEP GOING! (=

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The whole meaningful/bizarre names are annoying. Especially because they are bizarre.

Not criativity, laziness. It's easier to place stories where we're from, I get it, but at least do it with some sense. In the very least. But, really, I didn't know it was set in the Philippines until this chap's bottom comments, so it doesn't really matter. Chaps so far are way too short, but it's not the worst story I've read, and that's the closest to a compliment you'll get from me at 2 in the morning, with your short chapters.

LOL the name timothy reminds Zephyr of a mouse.. haha i don't know why, but i found that rather amusing..

i havent read your stories in a while.. i guess i just forgot about them. ahh, im thinking of trying to write again but i dont have the inspiration and yeah... im amazed that you're able to write these despite of your hectic schedule and loads of homework.. but good luck anyways!

hey! i love your story so much. it's really good. but i hope u update soon. because i really cant wait patiently. i love it and please continue with your story !

I was talking to a friend earlier today, and when she turns sixteen, her mom wants to send her to the Philipines for schooling.. and she said something about the Philipines having more Private schools?

And since you live in the Philipines and that your story is based on a private school, I'm guessing that it's true?

But I have another question,.. How is that you can speak perfect english? Because, you most likely speak tagalog, so I don't see how your english is really good as well.. based on that combination number tale, it would most likely mean you're the same age as me.. :)

and me as an example, live in the U.S., but I have really bad writing skills as well as .. just plain bad english.No offense, in any way? I know it's confusing..

Oh & one question about the story.. how old is Erys& her brother?

this was great. i loved it. write more soon~Mel

good job..though nothing much happened in this chapter..it spoke a lot..i'm enjoying reading it! upload REAL soon!

this was super! i loved it when erys dumped the goo on aerlon..i kinda like him too...hehe. i really liked the mane of the chapter. things are shaping up well!

i liked the descriptions...but got confused with the many guy names... i think you should describe their mannerisms along with their looks, to give a clearer picture. well done though.

good beginning to the boarding school...Seraph sounds like a cool friend to have.. too early to comment on tristan, ralph and aerlon, i guess.

the story promises to get exciting! it must feel weird...really weird...for just 11 girls in an ex-boys boarding school.

good one...but i think you should include her feelings a bit more. it's tough to leave your best friend, isn't it? sigh!

you wrote it in a pretty interesting way... i liked it. i'd like to know how the two look, though. i'm not able to see them in my head!

you did good..but the title of the chapter didn't seem appropriate...she wasn't dreading to go to boarding school, was she? she just gets ovet it.