This is so cute! And I feel really bad for Clara. I hope it gets easier to write the fifth chapter, and that there aren't so many false starts. Thanks for writing!

Very interesting!

Muwahaha. I like this story too!

I love Nicholas. He just seems really...elegant and umm...COOL...haha. I really love Alex too. And the roses hm.

HMM!love

wow! this story is good so far! i want to no what happens next so i keep reading then i can't go anymore cause you have no more chapters! *cries* up date please?

You have to write more. I'm really interested as to whats going to happen next!

a like it a thank you for finnally reviewing im kinda impatient and nickolas seems interesting and your finnally showing that some of the characters arent human cant wait for more

Nicholas is an interesting character. Glad to see him finally appear in the story. Keep up the great work.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~

Cool story. I really like it... and despite that have difficulty in properly reviewing this story. Oh well.

=) Mandraco.

Yay, another great chapter! It is well written like your previous chapters and I don't see too many mistakes. I like Nicholas. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Nicholas totally reminds me of a pervert fishing for young innocent boys to molest, via restaurant treat! GREAT chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Thank you for the update notice. I like Nicholas so far, the impression I had of him matches with what you've shown us up to this point. I'm also liking Neil. I'm hoping that there will be more of him and William, even if its not part of the main plot. And I must say it is refreshing to read something on fictionpress with so few spelling and grammar errors. It was a pleasure to read more of the story. I'll be waiting for the next update.(btw, is Neil scottish, irish, or something else? just curious as to what his speech pattern is based on, I like it)

Love the story so far ^^. I can't wait for more of the plot to unfold ^_~.

~DiamondKing

YES! They finally met*dances* it was an odd meeting, but it worked and I liked it so thanks you.I'm really interested in how this story is going to keep going it sound very good.

Excellent chapter! I really enjoy reading this story. It's great ^.^ Update whenever you can.