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| Curb Crasher 2008-06-05 ch 5,  | abuseThis is so cute! And I feel really bad for Clara. I hope it gets easier to write the fifth chapter, and that there aren't so many false starts. Thanks for writing! |
| efphrim 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting! |
| lilylupin7 2006-11-20 ch 5, | abuseMuwahaha. I like this story too! |
| SerialXLain 2006-09-01 ch 5, | abuseI love Nicholas. He just seems really...elegant and umm...COOL...haha. I really love Alex too. And the roses hm. HMM!love |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2006-08-23 ch 5, | abusewow! this story is good so far! i want to no what happens next so i keep reading then i can't go anymore cause you have no more chapters! *cries* up date please? |
| Hellion 2006-08-23 ch 5, anon. | abuseYou have to write more. I'm really interested as to whats going to happen next! |
| Morgana's Raven 2006-08-22 ch 5, | abusea like it a thank you for finnally reviewing im kinda impatient and nickolas seems interesting and your finnally showing that some of the characters arent human cant wait for more |
| SirScott 2006-08-22 ch 5, | abuseNicholas is an interesting character. Glad to see him finally appear in the story. Keep up the great work. Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~ |
| mandraco 2006-08-22 ch 5, | abuseCool story. I really like it... and despite that have difficulty in properly reviewing this story. Oh well. =) Mandraco. |
| Lady Psychic 2006-08-21 ch 5, | abuseYay, another great chapter! It is well written like your previous chapters and I don't see too many mistakes. I like Nicholas. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| . 2006-08-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseNicholas totally reminds me of a pervert fishing for young innocent boys to molest, via restaurant treat! GREAT chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Riyo 2006-08-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseThank you for the update notice. I like Nicholas so far, the impression I had of him matches with what you've shown us up to this point. I'm also liking Neil. I'm hoping that there will be more of him and William, even if its not part of the main plot. And I must say it is refreshing to read something on fictionpress with so few spelling and grammar errors. It was a pleasure to read more of the story. I'll be waiting for the next update.(btw, is Neil scottish, irish, or something else? just curious as to what his speech pattern is based on, I like it) |
| DiamondKing 2006-08-20 ch 5, | abuseLove the story so far ^^. I can't wait for more of the plot to unfold ^_~. ~DiamondKing |
| Midnights Scream 2006-08-20 ch 5, | abuseYES! They finally met*dances* it was an odd meeting, but it worked and I liked it so thanks you.I'm really interested in how this story is going to keep going it sound very good. |
| Zetsuya 2006-08-20 ch 5, | abuseExcellent chapter! I really enjoy reading this story. It's great ^.^ Update whenever you can. |