Shizumi-san, Even though I am in Spain right now (yes, that´s right, It´s me!!) you have blown me away. I. Wanted. To. CRY!! Its so sad, but nevertheless, one of your greatest works. Superb flashback writing, intense emotion, and breathtaking narrating; it really left me begging me for the next chapter. I must say that, without a doubt, you will become a great authoress, a vital part of life to those who are addicted to your stories (like J.K. Rowling is to Harry Potter fans) and that it is an honor, and a privilege, to know you in person, to watch as you develop from fledgling writer and amatuer drawer to astounding author and amazing artist, and to call you my friend. cheers!!

...I hate you...You may want to avoid me in school tomorrow, unless you want to give me some STORY to READ!...Stupid blondes...This is why I hate straight people...

Sweet, sad, and sexy all in one. :nods:

I'm jealous of you. I have a fear of writing sex scenes and in third person...and to do both is a terrifying thought, but you did it wonderfully.

:bows down to you:

Love xo

that...was...*AMAZING*...-speechles-

It was great! I really enjoyed reading it. I look forward to reading your next chapter.

I really enjoyed reading Tsuki no Hikari. The title is pretty. Vampires are kind of cool, aren't they? So dark and mysterious. I can't wait to read more, so please update soon, Kurohane-san!!

Here. I read it. Happy now?It was cute, but your word choices still don't make sense. I know what your going for, and I know a book that might help you. I'm pretty sure its called "Paranormal Investigators". Its by CLAMP. I think there's also a manga, but read the book. I still think you need a BETA, but the story line itself is awesome...Me want Yaoi! Kya!

Hi hi. I'm submitting this review for all of your chapters. This is a really great fiction, I must say. Except for the occasional spelling, grammatical, or punctuation error, it was well-written and flowed very nicely. You have a great plot line. Keep writing - I can't wait to read what happens next.

Aw how cute and sweet and aw. I just want to hug the two of them. I love how Shirogane is so worried about hurting Youhi, and how Youhi is so open with his feelings. He just seems so little and vulnerable...I love him. I loved his little thoughts during school...heh...

Love xoox

*squeal*kawaii-desu!

"but Youhi wanted to drive firmly into (no, not his groin)" Hehe I giggled at that.

I like how Youhi is so calm about everything..."a vampire is living with me and wants to sleep in my bed with me...oh...ok cool." that kind of thing.

I still love how they both want each other but just dismiss it...hehe silly boys.

Love xox

Hi! I just read your vampire story... Its really really cute. I like it... I though my vampire story was sappy but am happy to say... yours beats mine by far. LOL. Continue writing, and I shall continue to read. Thanks!

I love how they both want each other but excuse it because they don't really think the other would like it. It makes me smile. And when they were in bed together it was so sweet/hot... I love how Youhi wants him around so much...what a cutie.

love xox

“It’s a long story and it’s your bed time.” That made me smile ^_^ heh.

Youhi seems like a little kid and I just want to squeeze the heck out of him. That part with the finger...heh...yummy. bwaahaha.

love xox

Youhi's so cute and I just want to hug him. Shirogane sounds so hot and I just want to have sex with him...wait...what?

love xox