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| Reviews for Wings of a Raven |
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   A Midsummer Nights Sacrifice 5/16/06 . chapter 1This is how I feel sometimes... Mostly when dwelling on the past... Good emotion, good rhythem. AngelAngeEngelTenshi |
| Draketeeth 3/27/06 . chapter 1 Bitter and sad. It was good. "With my eyes I gaze upon my blood stains on the wall"Consider rewording. With all the my's in there it sounds really posessive and the word is over used. |
| Bonfire Of The Sanities 2/12/06 . chapter 1 wow...excellent! fantastic Imagery... excellent conveying nicely done! |
