interesting...but, why all the caps and such? did you not proof read?

I'll rewrite the ending for you, maybe toss in some chemistry with your stats, but I just can't let Romeo live... why must the first love always win? There's more than one Romeo for every Juliet.

never a failed delivery, never a unceasing beat, never a dissappointment, and never ever an unrelentless verse. what more? what more can i say?

kakyou

interesting~~ profound and takes time to realize the meaning~ great work

keep writing!