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Ellin Louise
2006-03-30
ch 1,
abuseamazing, short, piece.
simpleplan13
2006-03-23
ch 1,
abuseI love this short and so powerful.. love the dandelion thing & the cigarette thing
les petits bateaux
2006-03-11
ch 1,
abuseYour endings blow me away. Intensifyingly brilliant.
eden is burning
2006-03-09
ch 1,
abuseShort but perfect, beautiful work
in tesseraction
2006-02-23
ch 1,
abuseshort-n-poignant. i, um, REALLY like this.
crinkled aster ribbon
2006-02-21
ch 1,
abusei love the second stanza.

and i can relate to the first.

lovely and sweet.
Retailprice
2006-02-21
ch 1,
abuseIt depresses me so much to think I am the only person who reads your poems and understands buggery ** of what they're about =( I just like listening to the imagery in them, it's so pretty (:
faking closure
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abusem rah the 2nd stanza, pure bliss. lovely. :)

--naomi

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flaming.footprints
2006-02-19
ch 1,
abuseWow this was really beatiful. I really liked the bit abut the tragic cigarette. The second stanza was really gorgeous.

~Shavo~
Susie Mango
2006-02-18
ch 1,
abusem tragic cigarettes
girl with rad i o
2006-02-17
ch 1,
abusegorgeous. love the first stanza because of the dandelion touch to it. very, very nice.
bread and circuses
2006-02-16
ch 1,
abusethe images... so blissful. so perfect.
a lonely september
2006-02-14
ch 1,
abuseyou write beautiful, but hell, why am i saying, you already know. you've got to. i envy you so much.
AllyCred
2006-02-14
ch 1,
abusei love it, the simplicity of the lines have great impact on the entire poem, well done, this is amazing!!
dollface and her cancer
2006-02-13
ch 1,
abuseI can't remember if I saw the first post of this.. but I suppose it doesn't matter, since the second is just as brilliant. Moreso, actually.
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