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| Ellin Louise 2006-03-30 ch 1,  | abuseamazing, short, piece. |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI love this short and so powerful.. love the dandelion thing & the cigarette thing |
| les petits bateaux 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abuseYour endings blow me away. Intensifyingly brilliant. |
| eden is burning 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abuseShort but perfect, beautiful work |
| in tesseraction 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseshort-n-poignant. i, um, REALLY like this. |
| crinkled aster ribbon 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusei love the second stanza. and i can relate to the first. lovely and sweet. |
| Retailprice 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseIt depresses me so much to think I am the only person who reads your poems and understands buggery ** of what they're about =( I just like listening to the imagery in them, it's so pretty (: |
| faking closure 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abusem rah the 2nd stanza, pure bliss. lovely. :) --naomi loves |
| flaming.footprints 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseWow this was really beatiful. I really liked the bit abut the tragic cigarette. The second stanza was really gorgeous. ~Shavo~ |
| Susie Mango 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abusem tragic cigarettes |
| girl with rad i o 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abusegorgeous. love the first stanza because of the dandelion touch to it. very, very nice. |
| bread and circuses 2006-02-16 ch 1, | abusethe images... so blissful. so perfect. |
| a lonely september 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseyou write beautiful, but hell, why am i saying, you already know. you've got to. i envy you so much. |
| AllyCred 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abusei love it, the simplicity of the lines have great impact on the entire poem, well done, this is amazing!! |
| dollface and her cancer 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseI can't remember if I saw the first post of this.. but I suppose it doesn't matter, since the second is just as brilliant. Moreso, actually. |