|Reviews for pomegranate|
| Ellin Louise 3/30/06 . chapter 1
amazing, short, piece.
| simpleplan13 3/23/06 . chapter 1
I love this short and so powerful.. love the dandelion thing & the cigarette thing
| les petits bateaux 3/11/06 . chapter 1
Your endings blow me away. Intensifyingly brilliant.
| eden is burning 3/9/06 . chapter 1
Short but perfect, beautiful work
| in tesseraction 2/23/06 . chapter 1
short-n-poignant. i, um, REALLY like this.
| crinkled aster ribbon 2/21/06 . chapter 1
i love the second stanza.
and i can relate to the first.
lovely and sweet.
| Retailprice 2/21/06 . chapter 1
It depresses me so much to think I am the only person who reads your poems and understands buggery fuck of what they're about ( I just like listening to the imagery in them, it's so pretty (:
| having reached closure 2/20/06 . chapter 1
m rah the 2nd stanza, pure bliss. lovely. :)
| flaming.footprints 2/19/06 . chapter 1
Wow this was really beatiful. I really liked the bit abut the tragic cigarette. The second stanza was really gorgeous.
| Tyndall Blue 2/18/06 . chapter 1
m tragic cigarettes
| always gats b y 2/17/06 . chapter 1
gorgeous. love the first stanza because of the dandelion touch to it. very, very nice.
| bread and circuses 2/16/06 . chapter 1
the images... so blissful. so perfect.
| a lonely september 2/14/06 . chapter 1
you write beautiful, but hell, why am i saying, you already know. you've got to. i envy you so much.
| AllyCred 2/14/06 . chapter 1
i love it, the simplicity of the lines have great impact on the entire poem, well done, this is amazing!
| dollface and her cancer 2/13/06 . chapter 1
I can't remember if I saw the first post of this.. but I suppose it doesn't matter, since the second is just as brilliant. Moreso, actually.