   Ellin Louise 2006-03-30 . chapter 1amazing, short, piece. |
 simpleplan13 2006-03-23 . chapter 1I love this short and so powerful.. love the dandelion thing & the cigarette thing |
 les petits bateaux 2006-03-11 . chapter 1Your endings blow me away. Intensifyingly brilliant. |
 eden is burning 2006-03-09 . chapter 1Short but perfect, beautiful work |
 in tesseraction 2006-02-23 . chapter 1short-n-poignant. i, um, REALLY like this. |
 crinkled aster ribbon 2006-02-21 . chapter 1i love the second stanza.
and i can relate to the first.
lovely and sweet. |
 Retailprice 2006-02-21 . chapter 1It depresses me so much to think I am the only person who reads your poems and understands buggery fuck of what they're about =( I just like listening to the imagery in them, it's so pretty (: |
 faking closure 2006-02-20 . chapter 1m rah the 2nd stanza, pure bliss. lovely. :)
--naomi
loves |
 flaming.footprints 2006-02-19 . chapter 1Wow this was really beatiful. I really liked the bit abut the tragic cigarette. The second stanza was really gorgeous.
~Shavo~ |
 Susie Mango 2006-02-18 . chapter 1m tragic cigarettes |
 girl with rad i o 2006-02-17 . chapter 1gorgeous. love the first stanza because of the dandelion touch to it. very, very nice. |
 bread and circuses 2006-02-16 . chapter 1the images... so blissful. so perfect. |
 a lonely september 2006-02-14 . chapter 1you write beautiful, but hell, why am i saying, you already know. you've got to. i envy you so much. |
 AllyCred 2006-02-14 . chapter 1i love it, the simplicity of the lines have great impact on the entire poem, well done, this is amazing!! |
 dollface and her cancer 2006-02-13 . chapter 1I can't remember if I saw the first post of this.. but I suppose it doesn't matter, since the second is just as brilliant. Moreso, actually. |
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