amazing, short, piece.

I love this short and so powerful.. love the dandelion thing & the cigarette thing

Your endings blow me away. Intensifyingly brilliant.

Short but perfect, beautiful work

short-n-poignant. i, um, REALLY like this.

i love the second stanza.

and i can relate to the first.

lovely and sweet.

It depresses me so much to think I am the only person who reads your poems and understands buggery fuck of what they're about ( I just like listening to the imagery in them, it's so pretty (:

m rah the 2nd stanza, pure bliss. lovely. :)

-naomi

loves

Wow this was really beatiful. I really liked the bit abut the tragic cigarette. The second stanza was really gorgeous.

Shavo

m tragic cigarettes

gorgeous. love the first stanza because of the dandelion touch to it. very, very nice.

the images... so blissful. so perfect.

you write beautiful, but hell, why am i saying, you already know. you've got to. i envy you so much.

i love it, the simplicity of the lines have great impact on the entire poem, well done, this is amazing!

I can't remember if I saw the first post of this.. but I suppose it doesn't matter, since the second is just as brilliant. Moreso, actually.