This story is really cool! Keep it up! Oh and I hear that you like romance and fantasy stories. I kinda have a story like that! Wanna see it? It's really good ya see. I do like your story too! It's cool! Wanna see it afterwards? Check it out on my profile soon!

I like it, nice.

i love this story it seems very interesting! i like ur character keoko-san. this will b a great story.

I'm sorry I didn't review yesterday... I was hoping to be the first to review... but, oh well!!

I've been waiting so long for this... really I have.

The story is great so far. I really like the intereaction between masao and the main character and I can't wait to see what going to happen next.

Update Soon!! Her cousin is full of energy, eh?

I like the character development. foreigners is better tho! i just like that story a lot. it looks good, it needs more visualizations tho!