oh!...murderer! *is slightly scared* very interesting thought...

yea like crash said it ends like the giver but the giver was eviler. urs was nice

Good, good. As always. I like the last line in this. Reminds me of the Giver.

And Gaara/Naruto ALMOST happens. I'll show you some time, but when Gaara's leavin' he almost kisses Naruto, but shakes his hand, darnit. T0T

That's creepy, good, and kind of... neat. Good writing.

yea, its an interesting subject serious and sad good work

keep writing!