I audibly went "aw" at the end of this.
and making me 'aww' is a hard thing.
Nice job, dude.

simple but sweet. love it.((:
xoxo, dawnimoya.

this is so pretty & sad.
i loved it to bits

that was sad and cute. awe.

it's beautiful. (:

i love how simple yet beautiful it is ：）

its so pretty. imagery esp love the last chapter. (:

My god, that was amazing. Honestly, the way you weave a sort of story through these poems, and the way you repeat yourself but change it just a little bit on the last line each time- the formatting and just the idea, and some of the lines in this...it's amazing. Leaves me a little heartbroken and aching a bit, in a good way, if I make any sense.

beautifully written and addicting. you painted a 3d story in so few words. props :)

I love how you put the too and for you in parenthesis. It reall adds effect. Keep writing!

Fantastic narrative, I absolutely love it! Especially 'sense together'. . . Excellent!

oh..so shiny and nice. I loved the last chapter on this. For some reason it just hit home for me. Loved loved loved some of the lines you used. (paparatzi eyes) that was great. Keep it up!

it all leads up to this, doesn't it? i think my heartbroke.

~* noelle

"paparazzi eyes" were did you come up with that? that is, by far, one of the most gorgeous pieces of imagery i have read today. lovelylovelylovely.

~* noelle

"with boys who were everything but (not) you" that line struck me as something particularly beautiful. the whole thing is quite lovely but that line just 'wowed' me insistantly.

~* noelle