very true...writing for me is both a job, a hobby, and it helps pass the time. I find the best poems I write are the poems I write when I'm not paying attension.

i agree and disagree. i write to express myself or if something is on my mind. this is good though. ^.^

Oh, wow. If I were you, I'd feel very proud of this. I think the ellipse (or whatever it's called) in the second line of the 3rd stanza seems a bit out of place.