I love this story. :) Though the Andrew thing surprised me. I can't remember all the goodness that took place in your chapters but the phone incident in the last cahpter was hilarous!:) Awesomeness.

**...that ** scared me. ek

creepy tale brewing here. love the cultic activity re-emerging. something about andrew seems off. and cameron is definately hiding something besides a crush on john.

like the dialogue esp. never choppy.

very unique idea and I like it a lot.:) it's really cute

omg i love this story! you must write more, please! :D

Teehee! The story is moving well, and your pacing is wonderful. Things progress at a nice rate, and I like the changing in Cameron's and John's relationship. It's interesting. Keep up the goodness. :)

I think it is marvelous how John is developing. I wonder when he will remember more and then hm Cam or Andrew. and school

O_O Carmine so likes John...and I still think Andrew is a little creepy...dunno why. And I think John likes Carmine too...he's just distracted at the moment by Andrew.

Hmm... stray thoughts about Cameron, whatever could be the reason for those? Anyhoo, I like it muchly, and hope to read more soon. :)

this story if phenomenally strong. the character of John is great
can hardly wait for more

Nicely done. :) update!

- MM \m/

Good little chapter, makes me very very happy! So I like this whole thing, which I think I've mentioned before, and I enjoy the dialogue and the writing... all is wonderful, and I can't wait to read more.
By the by, your anonymous review thingy has been disabled, I don't know if you want it that way, but just to let you know. :)

Oh, it makes me so happy. I have no notion why more people haven't reviewed this, by the way. It's wonderful. Fantastic even. I think I've already mentioned that I adore your writing and the dialogue, but what can I say? I'm addicted. Can't wait to read more, as usual. :)

Wonderfully written chapter!!
Anxiously awaiting the next update...

- MM \m/

Oh my goodness gracious. I like this very very very much, you must know! Such an awesome beginning to this story and there's developing and awkward crushing on the doctor who cannot possibly be straight and yay! Keep up the wonderfulness and I will be a very happy girl.

Aiden