really ncie poem. i like the ruby thing. it was funny.

very interesting. I love how all the different stones are weaved into this. ^_^ very fun to try and find all of tehm. I like the line about glasses. Keep it up.

I love your use of stones/gems to get the colors across, i can see it in my mind, the images are vivid. I absolutely adore the last line.

I really love the whole color thing... nicely done

I am a sucker for poetry that I can't initially understand because of lovely metaphors. Hehe. So very elegant! Nice nice :)

interestingi liked itit's really creative

'Skin untouched. You made me bleed Emerald, Sapphire, Topaz,

Nearly a million shades freshly carved in flesh.'that was just gorgeous and so was the last line. you did a brilliant job on this.

I love this poem! Wonderful iamgery

intense piece, powerful images.

hellothis poem is powerfulits very gd

There's an honest twist in each stanza. "You broke my glasses telling me you didn’t suit a Rose

Quartz tint, Hidden Truth just wasn’t your colour."

I liked those two lines. Thank you so much for reviewing my work. Your poetry is well written. :)

The first line is confusing. Perhaps add a comma?

But I love how all the stones are interwoven. Brilliant

heartfelt and erotic~ well expressed emotions~

keep writing!

I love(d) "our skins still weeping/diamond drop pure passion tears." This is gorgeous and the twist at the end is absolutely cruel, darling. Lovely.

Excellent end line. Very colorful and well placed imagery throughout. Kind of a swirling semi-reality. Very well written and unique.