|Reviews for Semiprecious Love|
| luv me like no other 9/17/06 . chapter 1
really ncie poem. i like the ruby thing. it was funny.
| nofaceme 6/7/06 . chapter 1
very interesting. I love how all the different stones are weaved into this. _ very fun to try and find all of tehm. I like the line about glasses. Keep it up.
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 4/4/06 . chapter 1
I love your use of stones/gems to get the colors across, i can see it in my mind, the images are vivid. I absolutely adore the last line.
| simpleplan13 3/24/06 . chapter 1
I really love the whole color thing... nicely done
| Spare Change 3/22/06 . chapter 1
I am a sucker for poetry that I can't initially understand because of lovely metaphors. Hehe. So very elegant! Nice nice :)
| Thyrt 3/9/06 . chapter 1
interestingi liked itit's really creative
| a lonely september 3/3/06 . chapter 1
'Skin untouched. You made me bleed Emerald, Sapphire, Topaz,
Nearly a million shades freshly carved in flesh.'that was just gorgeous and so was the last line. you did a brilliant job on this.
| Julie Poe 2/28/06 . chapter 1
I love this poem! Wonderful iamgery
| myno 2/21/06 . chapter 1
intense piece, powerful images.
| Nine-Black-Roses 2/19/06 . chapter 1
hellothis poem is powerfulits very gd
| Carp 2/16/06 . chapter 1
There's an honest twist in each stanza. "You broke my glasses telling me you didn’t suit a Rose
Quartz tint, Hidden Truth just wasn’t your colour."
I liked those two lines. Thank you so much for reviewing my work. Your poetry is well written. :)
| Vyvyan 2/16/06 . chapter 1
The first line is confusing. Perhaps add a comma?
But I love how all the stones are interwoven. Brilliant
| mizu no kokoro 2/14/06 . chapter 1
heartfelt and erotic well expressed emotions
| none of burt's beeswax 2/14/06 . chapter 1
I love(d) "our skins still weeping/diamond drop pure passion tears." This is gorgeous and the twist at the end is absolutely cruel, darling. Lovely.
| Moondog Dozier 2/14/06 . chapter 1
Excellent end line. Very colorful and well placed imagery throughout. Kind of a swirling semi-reality. Very well written and unique.