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luv me like no other 2006-09-17 . chapter 1
really ncie poem. i like the ruby thing. it was funny.
e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-06-07 . chapter 1
very interesting. I love how all the different stones are weaved into this. ^_^ very fun to try and find all of tehm. I like the line about glasses. Keep it up.
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 2006-04-04 . chapter 1
I love your use of stones/gems to get the colors across, i can see it in my mind, the images are vivid. I absolutely adore the last line.
simpleplan13 2006-03-24 . chapter 1
I really love the whole color thing... nicely done
Spare Change 2006-03-22 . chapter 1
I am a sucker for poetry that I can't initially understand because of lovely metaphors. Hehe. So very elegant! Nice nice :)
Thyrt 2006-03-09 . chapter 1
interestingi liked itit's really creative
a lonely september 2006-03-03 . chapter 1
'Skin untouched. You made me bleed Emerald, Sapphire, Topaz,

Nearly a million shades freshly carved in flesh.'that was just gorgeous and so was the last line. you did a brilliant job on this.
Julie Poe 2006-02-28 . chapter 1
I love this poem! Wonderful iamgery
myno 2006-02-21 . chapter 1
intense piece, powerful images.
Nine-Black-Roses 2006-02-19 . chapter 1
hellothis poem is powerfulits very gd
Peach Rose Orchid 2006-02-16 . chapter 1
There's an honest twist in each stanza. "You broke my glasses telling me you didn’t suit a Rose

Quartz tint, Hidden Truth just wasn’t your colour."

I liked those two lines. Thank you so much for reviewing my work. Your poetry is well written. :)
Vyvyan 2006-02-16 . chapter 1
The first line is confusing. Perhaps add a comma?

But I love how all the stones are interwoven. Brilliant
mizu no kokoro 2006-02-14 . chapter 1
heartfelt and erotic~ well expressed emotions~

keep writing!
none of burt's beeswax 2006-02-14 . chapter 1
I love(d) "our skins still weeping/diamond drop pure passion tears." This is gorgeous and the twist at the end is absolutely cruel, darling. Lovely.
Moondog Dozier 2006-02-14 . chapter 1
Excellent end line. Very colorful and well placed imagery throughout. Kind of a swirling semi-reality. Very well written and unique.
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