I like the line about attitude patching the holes - it fits for the males; esspecially boys. As children I think you can tell what kind of man they will be. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

Well observed! I like the tone of this poem... the little-boy disguises are rather easy to see through, and your tone suggests this. Very nicely done. :)

*smile* I work with little kids...Nicely writen.