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Asylum Gates 2007-04-08 . chapter 1
Again, elegant beauty that makes my eyes dance with joy, except not creepy. I get this feeling a lot. I love the language - sighing wind through lacy branches - the moment a second longer than is generally socially acceptable - wonderful. I love this poem.
Phoenix Down 2006-03-09 . chapter 1
This kinda made me laugh and smile.Too bad there isn't really any answers.
Ryustorm 2006-02-15 . chapter 1
Well i haven't, but still i liked the suggestion. i've personally never wondered about those things before, but the line 'than is generally socially acceptable?'i really loved that line.
hey maria 2006-02-13 . chapter 1
Last three lines = perfect.
La Gitane 2006-02-13 . chapter 1
Very nice! I love the last stanza, and it's probably true for most writers here! Do I detect a faint degree of cynicsm about it all?

I'm not sure about the lacy branches. I applaud you coming up with different stuff, but I'm not sure if it works. I'm sure you could easily find a substitute. Unless you did it on purpose?

Another enjoyable poem. Well done. :)
multiples of six 2006-02-13 . chapter 1
This made me smile. I like it a lot, 'cuz I have odd thoughts like that pretty often. =)
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