Beautiful. Simply, beautiful.

this is my favorite story

Wow! This was amazing. So emotional, so in-depth. So incredibly in-depth. I was confused at some parts, on how she came to her realisations and the changes. But overall, I loved this. I guess handling stuff, especially like this is not best done alone- you can't handle it that way. You need someone else, whether you like it or not,and Dave and Kayt understand each other, complete each other, confide in each other. At least, this is my understanding of their character.

A job well done! Actually, I'm finding that I enjoy a lot of your fics and your writing, so I'll favourite you. Thank you for an incredible fic.

Gulistanlik

Outstandingly beautiful.

I don't know what to say.

Incredible.

I really don't think I could do this much justice with anything I could say, so...I loved it, and the ending was beautiful. Amazing.

This is so sad an beautiful. The imagery was intense. I could imagine everything so vividly. Amazing.

As the other readers have metenioned, there is no possible way to describe your writitng. It's powerful, imaginative, and emotional. It's extremly advanced compared to most writers on this site, and you certainly know how to let your voice, your own unique writing style shine through. I have never read a story where I felt so in tune with a character. When Kayt triumphed, so did I. You've left me speechless.Well done.

Wow - what can I say? I don't know what to say - this is so good, the - revealing of emotions, the releasing of pain...I loved this piece.

i really dont know what to say... that was just..it was so good i cant find a word to describe it...

Rlly cool. It has great imaging; when i read the bit about just sitting out on the rock, being called by the storms...its very ez to understand (it happened to me...), and you can easily see what is happening. Btw, update "legend of the laundromat queen s00n"! =p

This was absolutely amazing. Stories like this are part of the reason I go onto fictionpress to read, because it' not as likely that I'll find something so amazing and powerful just browsing through a bookstore. You have a serious gift, and you had better take advantage of it.

--RMS

This was beautiful. I didnt expect anything less from you.

The "I love you" came too soon and it was the most...surreal aspect of the story, but all in all, it was wonderfully written.

You have skill.

I am anxiously waiting for the updates to your other stories.

M. I love your work, you're still my favorite writer here.

I remember reading this before. I loved it then, and I love it now. I don't know what it is, but you have such a way with emotion. Whatever it is I admire it greatly.

I'd give you a suggestion for a title but all my title-making skills seem to be eluding me at this very moment.

P.S. Thanks for the email you sent me a while back. I'm so glad that I could make your day better. Everything I said then is true and you are quite amazing.

that was awesome. the character development was so... dynamic. amazing. pretty horrifying at first though -- kayt's reaction to her mom's suicide. >.o

wow you are amazing.