FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Famirka 2008-06-07 ch 18,  | abuseNoah is starting to get on my nerves...you dont help someone after they get drunk and cheat on you even of you love them GOD he is so freaking nice! |
| Vicious Hyperbolizer 2008-04-25 ch 18, | abuseamazing, plain and simple. |
| Amindaya 2008-04-20 ch 18, | abuseI love how he's so ready to make excuses for Eve. "You mean he took advantage of you?" Haha. |
| the-truth-is-verity 2008-04-09 ch 18, | abuseoh wow. amazing story! i absolutely LOVE it. please update soon! |
| Mage Dudette 2008-02-24 ch 18, | abusewow.. not been updated in a while.. :P (dw bout it though) its a good thing! i'm still liking this story, feel its starting to wrap up though, maybe, but can't wait to see what else is going to happen here! c'mon, update soon, you know you want to!! |
| Aiden Morrison 2008-02-06 ch 18, | abuseoh my gosh like so in love with this story! I love the plot. It seems really different with the whole Satanist and Christian thing. I personally find Satanism to be fascinating. Can't wait for future updates. I'm in love, haha. :] |
| magalina 2008-01-24 ch 18, | abuseAw, I like possesive Noah. Where did Brad come from? Did he bring Eve home? I bet Noah`s parents knew :o I love this story :) |
| narcissistic 2008-01-20 ch 18, | abuseeve wanted it just as much and hes guilty too! poor noah he doesnt even realize it he's blinded by love...sadness. |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2008-01-19 ch 18, | abusethis was really god. awesome!! |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-01-17 ch 18, | abuseI like Noah's dad :P Ack, stupid Eve! Wow, Noah's forgiving...wonder what's gonna happen next? O_O |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-01-17 ch 17, | abuseNow, there's a field trip! I'm kinda impressed that Noah's mum is willingly being near Eve... Ah, angst. |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-01-17 ch 16, | abuseOh, the drama... |
| paputsza 2008-01-17 ch 18, | abusecough cough. the fourth commandment is about the sabbath, and to keep it holy. psh baptists. -.- excuse me, i'm in a cult. I'm 7th day adventist so i'm pretty sure i can't help but know some things. Like 5-10 are the laws of the land i think. Things that if you don't do society will kill you for, like stealing, killing, committing adultry. the fifth is about the parents. Which makes sense, because if you don't listen to your parents too often you could end up dead too since you share the same gene pool. like "hey little boy, you shouldn't smoke crack, you could get addicted like so-and-so" em. w/e. i'm done. you should be christain, i sense you're pagan.. hum. |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-01-17 ch 15, | abuseHm, Brad, eh? Bet he's gonna show up again :P Ahh, they're so cute!! |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-01-17 ch 14, | abuseAww, flowers ^_^ How cute. But, wow, Eve goes to extremes sometimes. I wonder what he has against the love thing? Poor confused Noah... |