Hey, never commented here before but I figured it's time. I love your writing style. The is my favorite story of yours. Plus, Noah and Eve and too twisted for words. If you update I will build a shrine in you honor. Pretty please?

I think this story's my favourite, I really hope you and Venus will get to finish, it's wonderful and I'd really like to see it to the end.
But even so, I love it. It's interesting to see the clashing of Noah and Eve's beliefs, how each of them deals with their feelings and thair impact on what they thought was right up until they met each other. Noah's struggle with religion and a community that doesn't accept straying from the "right path", with what he feels and what he's told he should feel.
I'd really love to see this story finished one day. *hint hint*

(PS. Yes, I am stalking you. You have the right to be freaked out. *insert evil laugh* )

Oh shit, I hope Eve's alright... I am in love with this story, so keep it up!

What is Everto's (God, I love that name as well as the character) deal? I didn't think the religion conversation had such a big effect on him to cheat, but apparently it did? And Noah...he's just something else...honestly, the last thing nayone would do is declare they love someone when they find them cheating yet time after time he seems to be forgiving Everto but I guess that's the christian thing to do. This story is very inventive. I just love how they contrast yet fit so well together and how their religions play on their lives and personalities. I see myself learning more on satanists than I ever thought I would and it seems interesting...I can't wait for your next chapter. This story is fantastic

;_; wait... so its not finished??
:< damn...

Chapter ten is gone... I would like to read it? ;

I'm enjoying this story, especially the characterisation of Eve, though i wanted to smack him when he cheated on Noah lol, and I like the quiet sense of melancholy that suffuses it, but there is one thing that kind of irks me about it. I'm not the best Christian in the world by any means at all, and yet I can't help feeling that you're giving Christianity a very bad accounting in this while Satantism is getting the thumbs up even though it deals with hurting others and gratifying only yourself.
I also don't get how Everto occasionally thinks of himself as sinning against his rules, since sinning is a specifically religious concept, and you can only have the concept of sin if you have the concept of some higher power whether it be God or Satan, which Everto doesn't. The point is- I sin frequently, and yet my church has never said I can't be a member, nor have I ever been told I was going to hell. The Christians in your story aren't realistic. Not every Christian is a biblethumper, who screams that all gays are going to hell, in fact the vast majority of them aren't. I understand it's different in America maybe where you have more fundamentalist Christians, and more relaxed here in Europe, but even so. Everto isn't a Satanist if he doesn't believe in Satan really, he might be a hedonist, but he obviously doesn't believe in pure evil or aspire to it, he actually seems closer to Wicca what with the spells and everything.

Anyhow I am sorry for the long rant. I really do like your story and hope you continue with it, I just wanted to give the opposite side of the picture as well.

O_O; Wow, I REALLY haven't reviewed in a while. >.> Hey hey, continue this already. D:<

And you should HONESTLY made Noah throw a shoe at Brad and shove it up his ass. And why did Eve leave anyways? DD: He could've emo'd in the car!!

...and yet I still stick by the fact that emo is a music genre.

oh i REALLY like ur story... its so freaking awesome! please rite the next chappy soon XD

Oh man! What a surprising turn of events! I can't wait to see what happens next. This story has easily become a favorite.

poor noah...i hope eve gets his act together soon! *stamps foot

I like the story, and love that one Noah boy...but he is so IGNUNT! Why he gonna go and put up with all that foolishness? Anyways, good story. I think Noah should go gangsta and smack Eve around some. ^_^

Noah is starting to get on my nerves...you dont help someone after they get drunk and cheat on you even of you love them
GOD he is so freaking nice!

amazing, plain and simple.

I love how he's so ready to make excuses for Eve. "You mean he took advantage of you?" Haha.