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| TakaShira 2007-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting to say the least if I'd more time I'd continue reading it but alas I do not but I will be back and this little gem is going on my favorites list. |
| Carmel March 2007-07-28 ch 18, | abuseThis is a truly wonderful story. Your descriptions are fantastic, They just let the reader see into this whole world you've created. I like the way you use dialogue; it's realistic and flows naturally. And the storyline is creative, keeps you interested throughout the entire read. Like I said, truly wonderful. Good job on this, and thank you for writing it :) ~carm~ |
| Summer's Light 2006-07-10 ch 18, | abuseOmg! Nice! :D I loved it! Why did it have to end!! lol! Sry i waited till the end to review but nice job! :D |
| demonicfatality 2006-06-09 ch 18, | abuseHmm... It didn't seem TO rushed. I thought it ended quite nicely, really. Finally, after all of the constant bumps in the road, Kiran and Hali are finally together, no worries. |
| demonicfatality 2006-06-03 ch 17, | abuseOne responce came to that ending and that's "Aww!" I really love it. :) |
| demonicfatality 2006-06-03 ch 16, | abuseI love how you're incorporating gods and goddesses into your story now. It gives your storyline a whole new tone that is almost that of Ancient Greece. Great work! And do continue. |
| Raine 2006-05-25 ch 15, anon. | abuseI'm super busy, and hardly ever on the internet anymore, stupid exams! Anyways, it's getting good, and I hope you update soon!!Tootles! |
| Raine 2006-05-23 ch 14, anon. | abusethis is so sad... I hope it will get better and have a happy ever after.tootles! |
| demonicfatality 2006-05-20 ch 15, | abuseWow, what an intense couple of chapters. I'm very curious as to what will happen next. (Perhaps I should check my email more often?) Your review for Riders was quite amusing. Don't worry though... I think guy on guy makes most girls horny. c.c |
| Raine 2006-05-13 ch 13, anon. | abuseI'm sorry I haven't been reviewing lately; I have been really busy. I do want you to continue this story and I hope you do. Update soon please!tootles! |
| demonicfatality 2006-05-10 ch 13, | abuseTerrably sorry. I haven't been on the internet in almost two weeks. I did enjoy your chapter, though. The plot and character relations are getting more and more complex. I hope you get through your writer's block and decide to continue. |
| demonicfatality 2006-04-26 ch 11, | abuseThe chapter was rather short... but it gave a lot of new plot information so it was still really good. *nod* I love how you're starting to tie things together. |
| Raine 2006-04-25 ch 11, anon. | abuseThat's okay if you don't update really fast. I just got off from Spring Break a few days ago. My life is slowly turning back to normal again. I hope you have fun in Washington. Your grammar has really improved.tootles! |
| moon light 2006-04-11 ch 10, anon. | abuseThat was... so cut! *sob* |
| moon light 2006-04-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseYeah Like he said pitiful fool. He needs to stop feeling sory for himself! |