Cool! I really like this.

i love this poem too! life is so much like music!! i read it because of the caption- i wrote a song about cutting being like music and it reminded me of that

The introduction of this is very unusual, eye-catching. Nice work.

Wow, that was really good. I especially liked the (unforgettable, unregrettable) moments line. Brilliant!

wow... this painted such a vivid image in my head. i can completely see people dancing to upbeat music creating moments that end up being hazy but perminantly embeded in the brain. i love dancing. nice job!

Good ending. I especially liked 'emotionally charged words' and 'handsmotiongalore' which forms a lovely image in my mind. Keep writing