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Ayakaishi Fei 2006-12-31 . chapter 1
I'm actually not sure why I like this, or what it is that I like about it. I think maybe the first two lines are my favourite. I guess the narrator of the poem is folling themselves in some ways, but in a way that everybody does at some point in their life.
I like the way you use "excuses" as well. Its just so simple and yet it hits you. Nice.
Searon 2006-08-27 . chapter 1
This is a great poem, I like it =)
Ailonwy 2006-08-17 . chapter 1
Nice. I like the message... If you wish, you can read My Deranged Romance by meh. If not, that's fine. I don't expect you to review me back... I just stumbled upon your great poetry and can't stop reading. xD

~Ailonwy
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-07-31 . chapter 1
This seemed like an agry poem, but dont get me wrong, it sounds like sum of the stuff i write...its great...u are a really good writer/poet^_^
Widom 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
*fumes* Whoever this is directed to...*smack* Whether these are your feelings, or someone else's, people who hide their relationships with others because it isn't right are just...there isn't even a word. I hate them. Despise. Detest. There really isn't a strong enough word.

Nice poem, by the way. Well-expressed, and emotional enough to make me angry.
pneumothorax 2006-02-19 . chapter 1
Cute poem. It seems simple and upfront without anything particually hidden to it.
AJ 2006-02-14 . chapter 1
There's something about this that just...makes me adore it so, so much. I mean, of course (as per usual from LizardKing) it's beautifully written and of course it says something powerful; but there's...something else to it that makes it stand out, makes me want to read it over and over again (like good poetry should be).

I love the play-on-words you have going, the sort of mischief that comes out of the "being cold/hot" lines, and the overall feel of being empty but full at the same time that I get from reading it (which may or may not make sense). I don't know...I really can't exactly explain, but this piece is definitely giving off some amazing vibe.

:-) (Happy VDay)
darknesslivesinu 2006-02-14 . chapter 1
O I like it!
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