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nekopunkprincess
2006-02-28
ch 2,

abuseAfternoon, sweetheart. I just wanted to review to let you know that I love how this story is going, and... as sappy as this'll sound: I'm really glad I got the chance to write with you. Julian's always bragged about your literary genius, and hell... it's not that I didn't believe him...I just never expected... well, you. I knew you had to be something sweet like honey and fun, but ... well, ha. I guess I should just say I'm glad I met you. Words can't even describe you! (Sheesh, should I add "Marry me?" after that >> Hehe. SO sappy! ... But true.)Besides being able to create not only worlds for your writing, you create complex and alluring characters that draw your readers in with a fervor canny to some sort of religious devotion. Of course, your characters aren't the only people who are complex. You represent for me a kid who's been through some really tough times, yet no matter WHAT happens, you just keep on going. I mean, Jinny's told me that you don't feel you have inner strength some day, but I feel that anyone who's done as much as you has got to! And hell, as a writer who ... reads Julian's stories all through his mood swings and has learned her way through the paper bag, your writing does reflect all the goods times, as well as the bad. A nice lethal combination, don't you think? You know how to take what's inside of you and turn it into something amazing. Which is just another reason we love you. And. A certain Kitten misses you dearly, we just want you to know. He really wants to read this; apparently he's really excited about us collaborating. Ha. Crap. My leg is falling asleep. And it's TV time... aka. I stare at this TV hanging on the wall and listen to some really cute boy (

Darkladyknight
2006-02-16
ch 1,

abuselove it, really can hardly wait to see where this goes. So far, its sounds like it'll be a fun story. And I sent you my character page, so have fun with it.

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