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The Blind Guardian 2006-08-05 . chapter 1
A very late review, and I'm sorry. I get behind on my fictionpress reviews sometimes.Good poem, if somewhat bitter. I am very sure that it is friend worthy, though you've probably already given it to them a long time ago.One day, I just know you're going to write a love poem that is optimistic; I just know it.

Remy
violetsky23 2006-03-10 . chapter 1
well, it reads oddly for a poem, but i think it would make sense if it were sung, since it is, after all, a song. definately felt the same way, having watched my friends fret over guys and, being the only one without a bf, not quite understanding why.

thank you so much for putting my poems on your favorites list! i'll love you forever and ever.
This Paper Heart 2006-02-19 . chapter 1
Wow, that really good, I've been able to write Poetry. It's the only form of art I can't master__And about my story, I've almost got chapter three done, and four is in the works.
fopldr 2006-02-17 . chapter 1
This is very good. Very understandable. Very perfect. Good Job~!Nick!~
Raiast 2006-02-14 . chapter 1
Do it up! Totally give it to your friend, ESPECIALLY if they're having a hard time with stuff concerning this topic, because i know that it would have meant the world to me if I had gotten this from a friend a couple weeks ago
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