Reviews for And For Sixty Seconds I felt Whole Again

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Inflaming Kaliope 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. I'm going to look up that Magnetic Fields song now :)
Her Wishing Well 2007-06-30 ch 1,	abuseI loved this, amazing poem 'i dont miss the person, more like the feeling Stop by long enough to sit next to you, hold your hand, and for hours I would sit there still trying to soak up some essence of you.' - just great.
Toadster 2006-12-25 ch 1,	abuseI really love this poem. And love to read it over, and over, and over again.
toadster 2006-07-29 ch 1, anon.	abusegod, aren't all lovers hypocrites? I downloaded the song and its rhythm is brilliant. its so funny. whatatacky SUN SET what avulgarmoon-oh the roboticism of "romance", the tick-tock of the song provides a wonderful soundtrack to this poem. i probably suck at reviewing, but from my own experience, even stupid reviews are enjoyable. and i would like the full version of the roll that sticky poem (and you should probably check all your reviews if you don't know what the hell i'm talking about) do e-mail to the address above.
Crimson-Fantasy 2006-07-23 ch 1,	abuseI love this it's like one of those sensual deep sophisticated poems you here out of a tired old beatnick at a poetry reading. Its so raw and unforgiving and so inspiring. This sends a clear message it makes me think of the unrefinded spectacularity of a dark nightlife. I can picture som many things colliding together but mostly its just simple beauty really. Wow now I've got to read more.
Margot Tenenbaum 2006-06-19 ch 1,	abusei love this.this is stellar. "i dont miss the person, more like the feeling" what a heartbreakingly accurate way to describe the whole sham of love.wonderful job.
sunday night sky 2006-04-12 ch 1,	abusethis is amazing - i love all of it, but most of all the beginning and the line 'Seventy-nine thousand words and not one of them said what I wanted it to.' i can really relate. great job!
in theory 2006-03-31 ch 1,	abuse"seventy nine thousand words..." I can relate to that line, it portrays so much of the frustration I feel after attempting (and failing) to really exorcise what you NEED to in a poem. (you know those ideas that chase you with freakish grins and with pointed objects and threaten to control your life until you quench them. Well I hope so, hope it isn't just me..) excellent work anyway, I was pleasantly surprised all the way through by each twist love is green markers and a napkin.. interesting, lots. very strange, very right for me. peace
sunshineofyourlife 2006-03-20 ch 1,	abuseoh my goodness. this is amazing keep up the work, i love it! thanks for reviewing my work! --Sunshine
Lonely Cupid 2006-03-16 ch 1,	abuseHello! Thanks for reviewing my poem! :) Sorry, I know, I'll give credit to him after I update it! :) (About the poem) Good! Quite cool! I normally don't like poems without rhyme, but I think I'll make yours an exception! :)Haha, really good! Oh, and love is not like that, "love is like oxygen, all you need is love" -Moulin Rouge (Christian) P.S. I wopuld love to be friends with fellow writers, would you care if I e-mail you? Thanks! :)
brevis 2006-03-14 ch 1,	abuse"Salt-over-your-shoulder feeling.""He kisses, she clutches, and they call it love.""This is one of those moments you wish you could frame.""tacky sunset" Some very quote-worthy lines in here. Why, I do believe I've been inspired.
Dragonzz 2006-03-14 ch 1,	abuseI love it! Awesome job ~dragonzz~
are you from mejico 2006-03-13 ch 1,	abuseconfusing. needed to google the big word at the end.
the naked civil servant 2006-03-09 ch 1,	abuseSeventy-nine thousand words and not one of them said what I wanted it to. The hum of cocaine as she slides him a dime. It's that Itchy-feet-get-away-from-this-place feeling. This is one of those moments you wish you could frame. oh god. it's beautiful and so empathic it hurts. your poetry is so perfect in its development, it's always so cathartic &... wonderful :\|
sloppy firsts 2006-03-06 ch 1,	abuseThe development in this is incredible. i love the line 'He kisses, she clutches, and they call it love.' and how you put bulletproof in caps. Completely just wow. [+favs]

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