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| toadster-too lazy to sign i... 2006-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abusefirstly, i appreciate that you took the time to read my work and leave a review. it meant a lot to me. with that said, i'd also like to say that you're amazingly talented, and initially i'd just meant to leave a review for one or two things, you know, just to return the favor, but i definitely am now a fan of your work. second, about this particular piece: i am a great fan of writing that ends with a jerk. there should always be unsettlement, in my belief, so that it stands out in your mind. no one ever remembers happy endings. secondly, you have a real flair, atleast from what i've read so far for writing things that you can't understand until you've gotten further down the page. your writing, in a sense, is a minefield of insinuation. i'm off to read more. |
| Mary Phoenix 2006-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseSo I guess he did end up in the newspapers...in the obituary section. Sorry. Terrible terrible joke. I liked the message and the material. It felt a little rushed but I think that may be because you've actually never been in a war, right? Maybe I'm wrong. Anyways, I could tell you notice a lot of things and have a lot to say. Keep writing. |
| Jesse Kurtz 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseIt sounded... almost poetic really. If that's what you were going for Mission accomplished. It was alright... |
| Madison L 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseHmm. I guess I would have expected the story to resemble the poem more, seeing as you used the title. But it's alright the way you've done it. Brisk, I'd say, for lack of a better word. Cheers. |
| too many stars to count 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseyay!good story!yeah im annoying and leave reveiws-shrug- |