I'm so glad you updated! I'm still confused how they got from here to that first chapter, but I'm loving the ride! Great update; even though there's been a lot of time in between chapters, they really flow well.

this is a really great story so far...completely different to any of the other stories i've read on fictionpress so far, i love how you've kept the readers in exactly the same mindset as eden, with no memory of the past 6 months...tho xavier seems like a right royal pain in the ** haha...so i'm really excited to see how you go on from here, great idea for a story, and really well-written so far...can't wait to see what happens next! explaining more about what xavier's like, and how he declared war on her, to how eden's gonna deal with being his wife!! and rosaline?! so many questions! you haven't updated in absolutely ages though...is this story on hiatus? have you lost inspiration for it? i really would love to see what would happen next in this story, so if you have left it, i really hope you find your muse to write for it again, cos it's absolutely fantastic so far...i'll have you on author alert so i'll know :) hope to see your name in my inbox with an update soon!

omg...i love this...it was confusing at first but den it go so good..update soon...please...

I know you will think me crazy because this is the only thing of yours I comment, but I truly think it's brilliant and love it when you update it. You are a factastic author. I can't wait to buy your book someday.

love it so much that i'd kill to write like u

hey love it hope u can write more soon

I am really enjoying your story. You have me confused and enthralled. Keep up the good work.

Found a couple typos "don't look so embarass(ed)" and "his fingers blush my .." (brushed)...
"last immunity I had against being shock(ed)..."
"Get out of bed. Get dress(ed)."

hm i really like it, very interesting...

I discovered this story today and I'm definitely intrigued.

I must admit to being very confused and unfortunately, this is not a book or movie that I can complete in one sitting. I have to wait on your updates. So, update quickly please.

Great story you have here! I really like the plot and the characters! It's actually a very interesting plot...although I am quite confused...was this chapter insight into her past?...sorry about my annoyingness

Can't wait until the next chapter

Please write another chapter...i have to know what happens!

Wow! That is good. I'm so confused, but it's a good confused. I'm just really interested and excited to find out what happens next. Please update soon!

omg! you don't suck. i just wish you could write faster so i can know what's going on!!it's so frustrating, but that's why it's such a good read. you have me captivated to no end. i'd just like to say that if i saw this story on the shelves of a bookstore, i would definetly pick it up. keep up the awesome work and for gods sakes!! write faster!!

I love it! It's supersupersuper good!

And I will keep half a thought in my head. -nod-