nice, qouting no exit. YES

favorited. the way you wrote this was simple, yet really immersive and fascinating. i'm going to read the other stories that involve them, for sure. thanks for such a wonderful story! :)

Really truly enjoyed this!

I loved it... But why red?

Wow.

Just Wow.

The story was confusing, but there was some serious underlying meaning and confusion for Josie. It seems so serious, although so vague at the same time. It is a really good story though. Grammar can be improved, and descriptions can be increased, but it was a really good story.

It's nice to read a story that doesn't take itself too seriously...if that makes any sense at . It was fascinating, entertaining, and dark without getting too deep. Great story!

wow, this has got to be one of the weirdest things i've ever read, completely surreal ) i must say i enjoy your writing-style and the uniqueness of the plot. maybe it was a bit choppy in the end, or maybe i'm just tired out of my mind p anyways, thank you very much for posting, it sure was an interesting read!

the last line...)

great story !

Fantastic story. The story and characters were very entertaining. This deserves to be published, seriously. Though I can see those Christian groups not being very supportive. Oy vey.

The last line really stuck to me for some reason. Great job.

so uhm wow... that was really awesome o_0

i love the descriptions everything was very blunt and the images weren't sugar coated? the tone reminds me a bit of Palahniuk so yeah i found it really awesome.

Also liked the consistency of all the characters and ur main character was sorta likable o_0 which i dunno i kinda thought i'd dislike her for being so whiny and maybe that she'd be kinda pathetic, but she has strengh of character and her fatalism is probably well founded XD

so yeah that was awesome to read, thank you for writing and posting it! XD

This is such a weird story, I'm so weirded out. Maybe it's the tone of the entire story, it just seems so passive and lifeless and just like... well I guess a lot like how reality was for Josie, wasn't it? like time is just constantly passing by that there's really no sense of it. Why did Kristen have her killed? I completely forgot about that. And I don't really get why Curtis had to sell her ovaries? Yeah, I guess I was pretty confused about that part.

And the fact that the romance in here is so subtle. I hadn't even realized that Josie and Lucifer were having sex, lol. But it doesn't matter that Curtis came and took her away or not - bottom line was that his family was eating her liver, right? I don't know. How weird. It was like... you could see the relationship between her and Lucifer but it never really seemed very deep. I guess to her it probably wasn't, but that's also why it was shocking about the baby and everything. It's really a tragedy that she couldn't have babies anymore, especially after her experiences with them in the past.

Maybe it's for the better though? That she doesn't drag a baby into this world. Love Josie & Curtis though, and I guess even how subtle it was. I don't know. It was kind of nice.

Weird story, I repeat. I don't even know what to say. I feel like after reading so many chapters in such a tone, I feel a bit passive and like... like I've taken the back-sit to watch things just pass me by as well. Interesting.

- Alyssa

I loved this story. read the whole thing in one sitting. it was amaazing, seriously. a lot of it was a little trippy, the dreams, the babies, and ... there was this very real sense of pain. i dont know, i loved it.

lolz i loved this story. i cannot wait to read the sequel :)

this is a great story! i loved reading it even though it was a bit confusing at points. btw why did kirsten set the killers onto her (the main character)? also did she ever have any kids and did she and crtis ever get together? so many questions... and i thought coause she wasn't ageing when she worked for him in the begginming why is she so old now? and is curtis still going to live on without her? and does he look young and her old? cause that would be kinda freaky, anyway i LOVE THIS STORY PLZ WRITE MORE!

Hiya! Okay, so I've started reading this story, and it's really funny. I love Josie's sarcasm and the way she talks to herself. This chapter was kinda odd, though. I assume that more will be revealed in upcoming chapters. I just wanted to stop in and tell you how much I was enjoying this.