lolz i loved this story. i cannot wait to read the sequel :)

this is a great story! i loved reading it even though it was a bit confusing at points. btw why did kirsten set the killers onto her (the main character)? also did she ever have any kids and did she and crtis ever get together?!?!? so many questions... and i thought coause she wasn't ageing when she worked for him in the begginming why is she so old now? and is curtis still going to live on without her? and does he look young and her old? cause that would be kinda freaky, anyway i LOVE THIS STORY PLZ WRITE MORE!

Hiya! Okay, so I've started reading this story, and it's really funny. I love Josie's sarcasm and the way she talks to herself. This chapter was kinda odd, though. I assume that more will be revealed in upcoming chapters. I just wanted to stop in and tell you how much I was enjoying this.

Hah who dosent enjoy burying stuff under carpet:P Like figurtavely

Hhahahahaah he reminds mekindave of ray wise:D

I kinda expected him to be more commanding:P

This is a really unique storyline! Well i love it anyway:P

I love Death's personality here. It's so unexpected ... death griping about the fact that people are committing suicide. Death is usually portrayed as -wanting- more deaths.

I didn't like that there didn't really seem to be a motive for Death to do what he did. I mean, I get that it's a humorous piece, but why him? I felt like there should have been a reason for him deciding to give this guy a new body and make him his secretary.

For the review marathon! (There's a link to it in my profile)

That was really beautiful. I read the full story today, (as well as the sequel. You kind of put my life on hold for a few hours) and I was totally floored. Your writing style is completely engrossing, and I liked the way that you made it romantic in a really subtle way. There's a lot of little things that I love about the way Josie thinks, like, "It’s funny, how much more exciting my life has been since it ended."

I've got a few questions... doesn't Josie have friends or other relatives that she might have kept in contact with? Julian and Lilith seem to be her only attachment to her old life.
Why did Kirsten have Josie killed? I really don't understand what happened there. I got the feeling that Lucifer was lying when he told Josie what happened, but I can't really piece it together.

I absolutely loved this story. It was very well written and fun to read but there's just on thing that annoys me a little; Every time she smashes open a coconut there's no fluid pouring out of it and that usually does happen right ?

awesome

Lol, the first chapter of this was hilarious.

he's an **. he demands all these things from her, doesn't bother to explain the situations he might be sending his into and then expects everything to be fine. best kind of bastard there is

i read it all in one sitting. there was something really addictive about your story; i just found myself clicked on the next button at the end of every chapter. i'm really glad i stumbled on your story. (:

The, uh, ending to ch. 22 is...>_> confusing. I don't know if something is implied or wut.