| Reviews for disillusion |
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fishslappinghighlandflinger 5/31/07 . chapter 1Wow! This is really good. I love the way it flows and how the bitterness seems to seep through every word. Wonderful! Stan the Nerd |
arohalove 1/11/07 . chapter 1"good enough to borrow, read, and throw carelessly back on the shelf, with dirtyfumblinggroping (hands) fingerprints, but buying’s something else" I love the whole thing but this is my favorite part. Perfect words. |
Ellie101 7/17/06 . chapter 1An *awesome* poem! (The first paragraph's my absolute favorite.) :P |
sweetest tangerine 5/20/06 . chapter 1oh man, i really liked this. you're amazing with words. it took a couple reads but it's great really. |
a lonely september 3/3/06 . chapter 1holyshit. how could i have not found you before? this is so brilliant. i'm reading more. |
poetic abortion 2/23/06 . chapter 1i love to hate valentine's day, and you tell it so well. * noelle |
Vyvyan 2/22/06 . chapter 1Brilliantly writen. I love the use of parenthesis and the lack of capitalization. Also, thank you for the comment. I appreciate being told what I can do better. |
dress her up in fairytales 2/14/06 . chapter 1"i used to think that special actually had meaning/naïveté buried under barbed wire and razor knives/choking on the dishonesty you fe(e)d me. it used to taste/like honey, with just a hint of wicked sin" very powerful lines. i love it. |