Wow! This is really good. I love the way it flows and how the bitterness seems to seep through every word. Wonderful!
~Stan the Nerd

"good enough to borrow, read, and throw carelessly
back on the shelf, s m e a r e d with dirtyfumblinggroping
(hands) fingerprints, but
buying’s something else"

I love the whole thing but this is my favorite part. Perfect words.

An *awesome* poem! (The first paragraph's my absolute favorite.) :P

oh man, i really liked this. you're amazing with words. it took a couple reads but it's great really.

holyshit. how could i have not found you before? this is so brilliant. i'm reading more.

i love to hate valentine's day, and you tell it so well.

~* noelle

Brilliantly writen. I love the use of parenthesis and the lack of capitalization.

Also, thank you for the comment. I appreciate being told what I can do better.

"i used to think that special actually had meaning/naïveté buried under barbed wire and razor knives/choking on the dishonesty you fe(e)d me. it used to taste/like honey, with just a hint of wicked sin"

very powerful lines. i love it.