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| eighteen hundred 2006-02-17 ch 1,  | abuseThought this was really good. Second stanza in particular. Awesome. |
| FELICIA-SPENCER 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...I loved this! I liked that it presented an beautiful side of anger. I found this poem to be expressive and intriging. This is short of amazing, and I encourage you to write more. Keep up the amazing work. Laters. |
| crazy dog events 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseLoved this, especially the last two lines. Somehow the 'Mm' just added about ten points to the cool factor. I just had to imagine a man with a pince nez, sipping pinot noir, swirling his glass and saying Exactly Those Words. Do I have everything I need for the start to a perfect day? Rufus Wainright playing on my computer? Check. Lucky Charms on my bedside table? Check. Random-ass imagery from astral boy? Check. Looks like I'm all set. |
| frigg 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, hon, I'm not sure what to say except brava! Totally connected with a story I am writing right now. Wow, yes, just wow. This has to be one of my favorites of yours. Just splendiforous, I wish I had more than this to tell you, but then again I don't. Junk |
| sirius chatham 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseI like it; has a sort of runic/druidistic charm about it; it's dark, too. in a sort of...mythological, angry gods way. yes, it was good. sirius chathamps r/r my work too |
| silverguard 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abusewell its different, i like it! |