This was excellent, so sensual and elegant. The wordings just sizzle "good erotica". And you ended it on a very good note. So cool.

Erotically beautiful.

"windowshade eyes" is sizzling.

Oh! Racy! Scandalous! And everything between! I like it, though. :-)

A very Valentines day poem ... but not in a bad way, like the roses are red stuff. I like it. It's quite beautiful, like a song out of yesteryear. There's something about it that's just so ... captivating. ^_^

Choco

rubs up against my skin,chaffed hips are turning a bleeding-heart red.- chaffed, it rubbed raw feeling.

it reminds me of spring, in a beautifully naked way

You put this up here on Valentine's Day. Coincidence?

Very sensual.

Oo, I really like it. Very erotic and rhythmic.

Wow, this is great, I like it. The imagery is awesome! Great work, keep writing!

Breathtaking.