WOW!That was amazing!I've been slowly creeping through all of your things on here and this is by far the best!

You should be writing more one-shots, I desperately want more!

(Hey, fellow Gaian! :) I'm eatthemicrowave)

Okay this was a good one and you did have grammer problems. Since you already know that I have one thing to say; Shoot! The maincharacter was creppy espically since he was a boy making porcieleian dolls and fell in love with one of them! But 'hands bleeding in disbelief' that doesn't make sense as a metaphor.