Ew! xD I just started imagining that thing popping out of my own chest, and yeah. o.o But I liked this story!! It was nice to see things from a different point of view... You know, we always see it from the humans', but now we can see it from the chestbursters'.

The only thing was that it kinda confused me at first with all the cutoffs and new paragraphs, but then I gradually got the idea that it was switching points of view. GOOD JOB!

Aww... chestbursters are SO CUTE! *ahem* Anywho, I like it. Well done and original... except for the whole basis off of "Aliens." I know why you didn't post it on "fanfiction.com." I think that anyone who's been there knows why...

Well, it's too original for that site anyway. Couldn't find ANY mistakes. Kudos!