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| S.J.Olusanya 2008-03-06 ch 12,  | abuseI love this story its funny and cool, its so hard to put humor in my stories but I like how you blend it in |
| Shadow 2007-03-01 ch 26, anon. | abuseTeam work is nice. and i've been bleached... (whine.) |
| kreed 2007-02-21 ch 25, anon. | abusedue to the fact that i'm sure everyone is already getting mad at this chapter i;m going to just say that there is a reason that shadow is white, and it will be revealed shortly. second, lestat is not the name of the vampire that is in viator, darn windows typed that in for me instead and i;ve disposed of the problem. thanks for your patience. |
| Shadow 2007-02-21 ch 25, anon. | abuseokay first off you spelled throne wrong... you used this... thrown and that is basically what you do to a baseball. Throne is what a king sits on. 2nd off Lestat? come on... everyone's going to think of Anne Rice's character Lestat and truthfully Lestat is an idiot. A more orginal name please. And I 2nd that motion is a me line nice work... LOL... and Me WHITE? When have I ever been white? I'm called Shadow for a reason unless Ebony spray painted my coat white while I was sleepin... which i doubt. |
| shadow 2007-02-21 ch 24, anon. | abuseKage *yawn* not much i can really say... |
| Shadow 2007-02-21 ch 23, anon. | abuseLet's see... umm can't find it in me to strangle drake anymore... he has a misplaced sense of honor... I've been saying that a lot lately. Even though his methods are cruel its the only way he knows how to get the job done. |
| BixarroPsycho 2007-02-20 ch 24, | abuseYAY!! Kerry's back to herself!! w00t!! |
| For What Its Worth 2007-02-14 ch 22, | abuseAw, no flashbacks? Great chapter nonetheless, though. Poor Viator... |
| Shadow 2007-02-14 ch 22, anon. | abuseStrangle Drake... (finger twitch) |
| slayerofevil17 2007-02-05 ch 21, anon. | abuseAttention all slayer's Kreed Fans If you are not yet aware, the preivious chapters are mostly filler with enough info to move the story along. This is to answer alot of the questions that the beginning of this story put forth. but do not worry, the story is about to pick up speed and move very fast. so keep on the lookout for the next few chapters, cause if you miss out on one, you miss out on alot of important info. and just cause i love you dedicated fans so much, here's a little treat, one of the upcomming will feature a Shadow/Adrian showdown. Thanks again everyone. |
| For What Its Worth 2007-02-03 ch 21, | abuseOkay, that was a rather hidden piece of common sense. lol. But wont Kreed take the key away? So as not to let it fall into the hands of Ebony? And cute chapter, but Shadow still isnt rescued yet... |
| Shadow 2007-02-02 ch 21, anon. | abuseTo know what its like to be someone else is something that not many people can claim. to understand them even less possible. to truly comprhend you have to walk in their shoes and rememeber that no matter who or what you are that you can only be yourself. Holy smokes I was being smart... -_-' I think D had a hand in that one... LOL |
| BixarroPsycho 2007-01-30 ch 20, | abuseHilarious, mi amo! And, I have Kerry's Story, Chapter 1 up, so go read it!! There's more you need to know. |
| S. J. Clevenger 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseSoo cool. I absolutely love stories with characters who seem invincible and that can get out of any situation. Very cool |
| For What Its Worth 2007-01-23 ch 20, | abuseROFL. How badly does she beat Drake up? I love the pranks Kreed and Ebony play on each other. More would be welcome...hehehehehe |