Hey!

Screw set rhyme schemes, I LOVE IT! Girl, you always come up with some of the coolest stuff, and are always trying something new and strange. I'd love to know what you read. It would probably be rather fascinating. Especially compared to mine. Anywho, I think it's a great sonnet, and qualifies you for this millenium's new Shakespeare! Lol.

But, seriously, great job, really loved it. Unsurprisingly. I always love your work. And I loved the, well, love in it, as oposed to the usual angsty feel. But, sometimes you do the really sweet, sappy stuff, I have to admit. I swear, we're too much alike. Hopeless romantics, yet realists who see the pain behind the beauty.

At least, I think that is what your poetry says. To me, at least.

KEEP WRITING!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

I thought this was beautifully written. I liked it a lot!

PSh, I loved this sonnet! You followed the rules pretty well. I like it overallXD

*first review!!**...* Onee-chan, I love and worship your poetry-ness.