well, that hit the spot. nice

wow! now this is the scariest poem i have ever read, good job

Pretty, super pretty. Sorry it's taken me so long to review, I've just never had the free time.

well, is it suicide by pills or suicide by bashing-your-head-on-the-sink?and you can't have my soul. i sold it already.

I love porcelain. I dont know why but when something is described as porcelain, I just love it. If its cliche, well, I really dont know because I like it. hehe. Anyways, I thought the poem was a bit choppy. It seemed like some thoughts were cut up between a few lines. I really like the poem though, so nicely writingRhia

i love how, even after she lost her mask and she's bleeding from every which way, "she's still as lovely as ever".

:) nice

Wow, well written. Great work. Write on!

Anna _

'she's still as lovely as ever, falling into forever' I like this line the best. The whole poem is like mind candy. well structured, yet not too obvious about its meaning

wow, very vivid and impacting it is as if i can see the whole event occur infront of my eyes well done!

keep writing!

Horror and tragedy at it's finest. - ADD-san