|Reviews for Pills and Porcelain|
| rap-sucks 8/31/06 . chapter 1
well, that hit the spot. nice
| K. L. Kirby 6/5/06 . chapter 1
wow! now this is the scariest poem i have ever read, good job
| OneSilverWing 2/19/06 . chapter 1
Pretty, super pretty. Sorry it's taken me so long to review, I've just never had the free time.
| evilzipper the lazy 2/18/06 . chapter 1
well, is it suicide by pills or suicide by bashing-your-head-on-the-sink?and you can't have my soul. i sold it already.
| Rhianika 2/17/06 . chapter 1
I love porcelain. I dont know why but when something is described as porcelain, I just love it. If its cliche, well, I really dont know because I like it. hehe. Anyways, I thought the poem was a bit choppy. It seemed like some thoughts were cut up between a few lines. I really like the poem though, so nicely writingRhia
| always gats b y 2/17/06 . chapter 1
i love how, even after she lost her mask and she's bleeding from every which way, "she's still as lovely as ever".
| Princess-anna57 2/17/06 . chapter 1
Wow, well written. Great work. Write on!
| UselessAtrocity 2/16/06 . chapter 1
'she's still as lovely as ever, falling into forever' I like this line the best. The whole poem is like mind candy. well structured, yet not too obvious about its meaning
| mizu no kokoro 2/15/06 . chapter 1
wow, very vivid and impacting it is as if i can see the whole event occur infront of my eyes well done!
| arcane devices 2/14/06 . chapter 1
Horror and tragedy at it's finest. - ADD-san