 x3life 2007-12-30 . chapter 1this was so cute!! and it really goes on at ur school... wished something like that happened at mine. =) |
 Oasis Blackmore 2007-08-14 . chapter 1This was adorable. I loved the paper-hearts concept. It reminded me of those utopia stories, like "The Lottery" or "Harrison Bergeron" or something else to that effect. Naturally, this wasn't that . . . insane, but the whole thing just had that kind of air about it.
I loved Amy's character; hypocrites are so true to humanity, and she played the part perfectly without coming off as an outright fool.
"He was her Luca." For some reason, this line really made my day. It was profoundly romantic, I'd say.
Lovely work.
~ Oasis
Post Script:
Thank you very much for your review to my fanfiction story, "Forbidden Fruit." I'm honored that someone with your talent enjoyed my writing. |
 brittle hearts 2007-06-19 . chapter 1That's an interesting tradition. Really nicely written. :) |
 Kailum 2007-04-30 . chapter 1Aww that was adorable! And wow. When I read about the tradition, I was like 'this is so bs.' Except it isn't and WOW! XD Very amusing story. And this review is sorta late but... ^_^;; |
 JustWriter 2007-01-28 . chapter 1(squeals in excitement) I love it! (raises eyebrow) Wait, I say that about all of your stories, don't I? I guess I'll have to compensate.
J'adore ces la roman! (I love this novel) I know, it's not a novel, but I'm only in my second year of French so bare with me kay?
-JW`chan ^-^ |
 Da Vinci at Work 2007-01-02 . chapter 1Pretty one-shot. Love the ending. |
 LifeisCereal 2006-10-31 . chapter 1Aww, what a wonderfully fluffy cotton candy of a story! (Yes, I realized I over metaphored that... do I make sense?) This is sweet... I think maybe I should introduced the hearts idea to my school. xD |
 Snowhite 2006-08-26 . chapter 1Aw! I love this story. It's a oneshot, right? Meh, too bad.
I wish we had this tradition at our school. I think I'd probably take on Amy's point of view though (yours too?).
Anyway. Awesome writing. |
 Slander By Osmosis 2006-08-24 . chapter 1Are you by chance (this might sound like a REALLY stupid question...) Melika Elena on fanfiction.net? Uh, anyway, that was a very great one-shot! I'm glad that I read, even though it's been posted for some months now. I look forward to reading your other writings.
- Lithely |
 pinkfairydust 2006-05-12 . chapter 1hey you should keep working on this! its got a pretty good base for it! |
 SmkyRngr1986 2006-03-19 . chapter 1Hey. I'm back with another fantastic review. I would LOVE to see a sequel. OMG. The fluff is overpowering, yet so seductive!
I love fluff. o.0'
Well, keep up the good work. Keep 'em coming! |
 citrus raindrops 2006-02-19 . chapter 1simple and sweet =] the tradition in your school's funny. i wish my school was a little more interesting |
 ThePiracyOfHearts 2006-02-16 . chapter 1Dear Lady.
You make me smile big.Like... really really big.
♥, ThePiracyOfHearts. |
 Chanteusse 2006-02-16 . chapter 1predictable but still very sweet. ^_^
made me go 'aw'. ;)
Hope you had a happy valentine's day! :D |
 Trmpetplaya1 2006-02-15 . chapter 1THAT WAS SO CUTE! Usually I'm ignore the V-day, and all of it's accompaning fluff stories, but this one was really enjoyable and realistic. Kudos to you. And spiffy tradition, by the way. Loved the story; keep writing more! |