 myheartwantsyou 2006-06-19 . chapter 1beautiful, very well written and flows amazingly well |
 Starrlena 2006-05-07 . chapter 1Wow, this is just beautiful. I love the line 'I have no fear of Nocturne’s kin,'. |
 Magentian 2006-03-30 . chapter 1It sounds so ... frolicsome. :D Frolicsome in the manner of the old classical poetry, like a T. S. Eliot. I'm glad to see college is doing you some good. >:P
Very nice job, short and succinct, but quite enjoyable. |
 Aedrastea 2006-02-17 . chapter 1Wow, I loved reading this! Most poems I read now are in free verse, which I really like, but its still nice to read a really well-written structured poem. And often, when I do read poems that rhyme, the rhymes are rather odd and it sounds stilted. This wasn't like that at all; the way everything flows is amazing! |
 Luthiena o Lorien 2006-02-15 . chapter 1I am unsure of the meaning of "hoary". Of course, I could always get off my lazy butt. ; )
Oh, very nice. I love the twist on this. |
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