I love your characters in this. They seem real in the way that humans are never really any extreme; they're just there and... I don't know. I don't know what I'm talking about. Anyway, yeah. I thought your characterization was especially interesting. You should try your hand at prose.

this is wonderful! it rather reminds of me warren schmidt and his wife, although with a gender reversal. although generally mean who do themselves too well on the starchy foods are genial blokes.

This is terribly sad, but very well written. I love the flow, and the run-on lines. thanks also for the review :)