I like this. It seems really good. Jerry is cool. It's like having an annoying imaginary friend that never goes away. I also like the underlying "religion has nothing to do with God" theme. Very nice.

I like this idea--it's very interesting. And Jerry is such a cool character! I like him. I also like the repetition you have in the chapters; it's very poetic. The only nitpicky things I have to tell you about are some spelling and gramatical errors . . .do you need a beta?