im loving this roxanna!

Cool beginning!There were a few spelling errors,you might want to check it out.

Hey, you should really update this one, you know? There were a couple of spelling errors, but I don't really have the time to go through them. If you'd like me to go through them, feel free to PM me or something.

What I like in stories is that they don't end abruptly. It's like... the author doesn't cut you short but they also don't make you think 'Damn, this is getting too long...'

You're really good with knowing the limit. And you do it really well. Good job, I like this story! Continue!

omfg, i REALLY REALLY look forward to the next chapter YOU MUST UPDATE!! >=O

It feels weird reading because we already know what happens. Surprise us!

Update soon!

lmao..sounds..er...nice!

at first i ws gonna turn awya but i have decied to review and read on

Wow...this is really really beautiful. I love how you described the character's remorse and when everything just fell apart. The ending was stunning. Any chance this could be more than a one shot?

oh cool!

o its a good beginning...it hooks the reader in and makes us want to read more...please continue!

great so far!! seems more like an ending than a beginning though...is it a one-shot?

Continue! You must continue!

aw, that's so sad. what a horrible thing to experience. is this a one-shot?

Kinda fast paced but I wouldn't say that would be bad, 'cause it's just the first part of the story. I'm interested in this. Keep going.