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Reviews For: Immortal Vampire

NicoleMarie87
2006-02-27
ch 14,
abuseis that then end? because i think there should be a sequal or something of how the pure immortals live with out the vampire prince and/or how they start building up the pure immortal population. wow that sounds so wierd when talking about immortals and such. anyways great chapters!! can't wait to see if thats the end or not! ~nicole
NicoleMarie87
2006-02-15
ch 3,
abusegood start for the story, interesting too. can't wait for the next chapter to see what's going to happen. i suspect a fight! lol. your chapters are really short though. you should make them longer, just my opinion. can't wait for the update!~nicole
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