 Jezsh 2006-03-12 . chapter 1interesting, unusual. Guess that's all I can say :) |
 crinkled aster ribbon 2006-02-21 . chapter 1ahh, i can relate. very touching and lovely. |
 chaos called creation 2006-02-18 . chapter 1It definitely has a 3 am feel to it. The way you captured the moment was beautiful. Keep writing |
 lackluster 2006-02-16 . chapter 1i love the idea behind this. it's strange but it's good. |
 forsakensmile 2006-02-16 . chapter 1Love it. How true, and your style never fails to impress me. |
 poetic abortion 2006-02-15 . chapter 1last.line.is.so.'effin.amazing.
~* noelle |
 mizu no kokoro 2006-02-15 . chapter 1has a very well developed tone~ and an interesting perspective~ nicely done
keep writing! |