Beautiful imagery. I like it. I noticed one little error here: "too alive within each others eyes". Shouldn't there be an apostrophe in possessive "each others"? I'm not sure about the symbolism of watches and clocks, but that was the one line I didn't like because it didn't seem related to the rest. Maybe it's just me?

Anyway, I adored this poem. It's going on my favorites list.

XD Thanks for a peek inside your imagination. Nice poem!*kw gummi