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MiddiVampira 2008-05-17 ch 17,	Haha that was nice, k more like AMAZING, like everything I've read by you. Alex and Blythe are cute, Adrian is cuter, and Korbin is the best lol. I LOVED this story. Can't wait to read more by you. Love Middi~
NFMadProps04 2007-09-29 ch 5,	This was very very very good! One of the best vampire fics on (mainly because it was good and didn't feel like it was written by a super angsty 13 year old lol) Big great high-fives. I absolutely loved it and feel your pain about reviews. I got three on here and one hasn't had like, barely any reviews. :(
BlueHarpy 2007-09-10 ch 17,	This story was very good. I feel your pain about hardly any reviews. I have switched to three different sites because of that problem.sighs oh well
BWeep 2007-07-18 ch 17,	Wow...I'm so glad I read past the first few chapters. Once you read more it is really, really intriguing. I love the way you get into their minds, especially Blythe. Those chapters are deeper and much more mature than most of the stuff you can find around here. Heh..Bravo! =)
Blackangle2011 2007-07-06 ch 17,	good story
Swan Odette 2007-05-11 ch 1,	-squeal- I just finished this! ^.^ I loved it! The ending was very subtle and I liked how everything sort of just came together! ^.^ It's going on my favorites! Keep writing! Odette
Itsa Mia 2007-01-28 ch 17,	She never said it. I loved your story. I loved the irrelevance of Korbin meeting Adrian. It was actually a very satisfing ending. I really liked how the vampires all became a bit more human in a sense, and I just enjoyed it so thoroughly that i'm left mostly speechless. I liked how you decently cut out the lemons. not that I have anything against them, but you didn't cut them out and leave the story feeling empty. Loved it. I'll look at you other work too. :D
instantvoodo 2006-12-27 ch 17,	good story, the whole pet-of-torture to night-lover was an interesting turn of events, i think with a little help you could get this published. well, in my opinion. maybe add a deeper plot and lengthen it a little more. yea, the whole idea is perfect. i think that maybe if you added the raven in the fisrt chapter it would be better also. maybe when their degrading the tomb the raven cries out before blythe makes an appearence. all and all you've got some writing talent.
A.V.Mackie 2006-11-29 ch 2,	Good GOD, control your damn tense, one minute it's past tense then in the same bloody sentence you've changed to present...that's bloody annoying. I feel I could like this story but this "tense" thing just bloody well irks me!
otato-pay 2006-04-10 ch 17,	Darn. I'm sad that this is over. I really enjoy your writing style and I'm looking forward to more of Monsters Under The Bed.
pianomasterette 2006-04-10 ch 17,	o!! That was so good! I think it had a wonderful ending...however I wish it went on? Do I sense a sequel? No..probably not. Anyway, lovely story m'dear. Congrats!
Bug 2006-04-01 ch 17,	It's over ='( I like it... great ending.
moonlight-dragon3 2006-04-01 ch 17,	Wow great story.. really well done and i enjoyed all of it. Sad to see it end but look forward to more storys from you... Again thanx for writting such a great stroy :)
otato-pay 2006-03-29 ch 16,	I never thought about vampires blushing. You think of good details which make this story very well writen :)
otato-pay 2006-03-29 ch 15,	This chapter is mainly set in the bedroom. And it's good to see that Alex is getting along and he's happy. No comments about writing style today, sorry.

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