Secrets... that's what this reminds me of. I like it, especially the lines "

What if I illuminate your face with the soft, warm glow of the candle I hold deep within my heart?

Will the flame’s warmth be enough to melt your chilly hands?"

=D Maranwe Telrunya

Oh, by the way, yes, she was schizophrenic [is that how you spell it?]in "Lily Payne". That's what the whole last flashback was about, when she had the baby. =D thanks for your reviews, they are *much* appreciated =D Maranwe

I love the abstract verse in this; it really sets up this beautiful landscape of words. Wonderful - I loved it! Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.