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| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-07-28 ch 1,   | Secrets... that's what this reminds me of. I like it, especially the lines " What if I illuminate your face with the soft, warm glow of the candle I hold deep within my heart? Will the flame’s warmth be enough to melt your chilly hands?" =D Maranwe Telrunya Oh, by the way, yes, she was schizophrenic [is that how you spell it?]in "Lily Payne". That's what the whole last flashback was about, when she had the baby. =D thanks for your reviews, they are *much* appreciated =D Maranwe |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-02-16 ch 1, | I love the abstract verse in this; it really sets up this beautiful landscape of words. Wonderful - I loved it! Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |