i like this one, but do sometimes wonder where it's all going. but don't change a word!

I really like this. I don't know why. Its a little confusing with the "she", "he" and "mother". I got a bit confused about what was happening there, who was where and such. Or maybe thats just me not reading properly. Anyway, i really enjoyed this. I might add it to my favourites. I would love to see it when its no longer a "work in progress". :)